image is quite cluttered, we kind of get a grasp of the concept from the title but the overall meaning is lost through the image - theres so much going on. the concept you have used is so big and interesting it would be difficult to put it into one photo.
Not particularly aesthetically pleasing, quite overwhelming, though we wonder if this was your intention? Title could be the image alone and be more effectively than the image itself. Quite confused by technical aspects of image also
If you balance these things this equals moderation?
The equation/title is more effective than the image, the image is a bit disjointed and on its own is a very unclear image. Also the 4 separate images are seemingly unrelated and/or it’s hard to tell what they are. We think a simpler image would have conveyed the idea better, perhaps too much is trying to be said at once.
Cool title! cool Image!! Good Photoshop!! Well executed. Good Overall photo aesthetic. but if you meant to relate the images still the word moderation is in question.
We don't really understand the relationship between the title and the image (because we can't actually recognize what the images are) but the title explained the concept more than anything. The image definitely has a lot going on, but also think that this was meant to be the point?
Cool image and colouring. The composition and repeating shapes are really lovely - especially the organic circles against a cityscape
The title and photo can be quite confusing, once we got our heads around it a bit better we realised the impact of the issue this group is raising. It was something very interesting which we had not really thought about before - not an obvious fashion issue. We had a good discussion over this - the title helped
Fur > factory > Smog? Title helps to increase understanding of concept, but had to look a few times at image to decipher concept. Title made it clearer.
We don't really see the relation between the title and the image! Really nice quality of the image - we see that you have a strong concept that wasn't shown as effectively in the image as in the title.
idea of consumption clearly shown by the clutter and busy nature of the image. Like how the cityscape shows mass consumption in a confined environment.
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interesting approach to your concept, very effective title and composition which helps us understand the image.
The title explains the image, however without it the image makes no sense. The image itself is rather cluttered and too busy.
original execution, not sure of relevance of buildings/ city scape. Title helps explain image more clearly
The title says more than the image as image is overwhelming and could have been done simplier.
image is quite cluttered, we kind of get a grasp of the concept from the title but the overall meaning is lost through the image - theres so much going on. the concept you have used is so big and interesting it would be difficult to put it into one photo.
Not particularly aesthetically pleasing, quite overwhelming, though we wonder if this was your intention? Title could be the image alone and be more effectively than the image itself. Quite confused by technical aspects of image also
If you balance these things this equals moderation?
The equation/title is more effective than the image, the image is a bit disjointed and on its own is a very unclear image. Also the 4 separate images are seemingly unrelated and/or it’s hard to tell what they are. We think a simpler image would have conveyed the idea better, perhaps too much is trying to be said at once.
Cool title! cool Image!! Good Photoshop!! Well executed. Good Overall photo aesthetic. but if you meant to relate the images still the word moderation is in question.
We don't really understand the relationship between the title and the image (because we can't actually recognize what the images are) but the title explained the concept more than anything. The image definitely has a lot going on, but also think that this was meant to be the point?
There's a lack of explanation in the image. Interesting but possibly because its unclear.
Very confused by this image. The title says more than the image.
Title is a great help to understanding the image, although it still isn't entirely clear. Love the image of the fur in the washing machine though.
Cool image and colouring. The composition and repeating shapes are really lovely - especially the organic circles against a cityscape
The title and photo can be quite confusing, once we got our heads around it a bit better we realised the impact of the issue this group is raising. It was something very interesting which we had not really thought about before - not an obvious fashion issue. We had a good discussion over this - the title helped
Nice to see something very different!
Fur > factory > Smog? Title helps to increase understanding of concept, but had to look a few times at image to decipher concept. Title made it clearer.
We don't really see the relation between the title and the image! Really nice quality of the image - we see that you have a strong concept that wasn't shown as effectively in the image as in the title.
Title is more thought provoking than image. The image could of been simplified, to clearify concept. Individually images are beautiful.
idea of consumption clearly shown by the clutter and busy nature of the image. Like how the cityscape shows mass consumption in a confined environment.
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